Sunday, September 30, 2007
Class Assignment 2: Moment - Final.
This is a 'come hither' moment. I think the simple gesture can represent many things depending on who is viewing it and the state one is in when viewing in.
For instance, it can be a gesture of openness. A sense of need, a weak plea for help.
Or it could be an effortless beckoning to another individual. So it is rather powerful.
It could be the elegance of a lady in dance.
There are many more possible meanings I feel, but it definitely looks like a motion in the middle of something. So I think it represents a real moment.
Sunday, September 16, 2007
Class Assignment 2: Moment
Saturday, September 15, 2007
Needful Things: Developments 3 + Final
It was easier to work on and I've finally finished this piece.
Here, I switched the leg positions to make it simpler.
Found this one over-simplified. So I changed the wing shape and got the final (next pic).
Needful Things: Developments #2
It was starting to look good but I couldn't see how it would look good simplified...
Needful Things: Developments I
This is the final image from which I will be simplifying to create the symbol.
I'm not sure if I will continue drawing or to use photoshop, as it's easier for replication.
I'm excited to see how it turns out!
Needful Things
- Final image: Problem with this is the similarity to netball.
This is the alternate idea for basketball.This is somewhere in between the spectrum of simplicity, but since I've decided to move away from basketball entirely, I won't be developing this further.
Me, Myself & I: Developments #3 + Finalized
Me, Myself & I : Developments
Instead of just placing the final picture presented in class, I've included my progression just working within photoshop.
Love:
As my first piece, this took a lot of effort. I had to find multiple pictures of trees in the right shape and adjust the branches to form the lettering properly. Scouting, naturally, was difficult.
- This was a rough draft reflecting the original design, to give myself an idea of what next to work on and how it would look.
- I plan to further correct the backdrop, possibly going back to the original idea of the butterfly and ribbons/waves, but probably only with soft outlines so it's light and not distracting. If that doesn't work, I'll likely leave it blank. (I just don't fancy empty white spaces!)
Hate:
I switched the lettering for R to a sword with a katana across it, as it was too difficult to decipher the lettering when I used rifles.
I experimented with several effects and found most of them wouldn't fit in the font because the letter R was particularly small and looked ugly enlarged.
The 'E' didn't seem to fit with the other font so I edited it as you will see in the next picture. I liked the effect of the 2nd torn 'E' and realised that all the violent effects that I found couldn't be fit into the text itself because it took away the uniformity and the metallic effect of the text.
I had 2 problems with the letter 'R'. When the sword was in full length, it distorted the effect of looking like R. When shortened, it didn't look like a sword. So I fixed it here by breaking the length into shards so the main part is bolder to allow the 'R' effect to come through.
I also thought the 'A' being in the same format as 'B' and 'E' made too much of the text uniform, which in effect made the other letterings look out of place - like I just put it there because I could. So I changed it and was particularly pleased with the effect of a sniper stretching across a neat left half of the 'A'.
Aside from the text being a little too small, I was quite happy with the effect of this piece, but needed feedback as to whether there was too much going on in the background.
The tutorial group was quite divided on this. Some said the chaos perfectly reflected the idea, which was what I had in mind. But the others said it was a little distracting.
I plan to try to make the font larger and incorporate the effects into the text itself.
If this doesn't work, I will likely try to make the font slightly larger and take out some of the grey in the background but leave the effects there. I like how they make the idea of violence resonate throughout, making the entire paper an artpiece. "my name is" and "i hate violence" would be stranded otherwise.
I really like most of the effects of the bullets and glass smashing because of how it effectively conveys violence. But some of these would make the text unreadable and that defeats the purpose.
I have to find a way to bring the elements together.
Friday, September 14, 2007
Me, Myself & I
- Waves as lettering, with flowers and surfboards as the gaps in lettering.
Classroom drafts for Hate:
2 Presented in Tutorial:
-Chosen for further development